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The diagram illustrates the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor.

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The diagram illustrates the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor. Overall, the process was extremely implementation and they have different setup for doing this procedure. In begin, a gas cooled nuclear reactor has two main parts which are the main reactor and heat exchanger. Likewise, in reactor was connected to the heat exchanger and the procedure was continuously going. Moreover, reactor was covered by concrete radiation shielding. Inside the concrete, there is a massive tube, its cover was made by a pressure vessel. Inside that thing, there are graphite moderators and uranium fuel elements included. Although, graphite moderators are connecting with boron control rods and that rod can manual work. Next, inside the heat exchanger they had spring tube. Furthermore, When the hot gas came to the heat exchanger from the reactor with the upper connector. as well as, same time, water circulator can operate the pressure of the water and that hot gas was go inside the heat exchanger. Eventually, ater was convert to the steam and that steam was going to the turbo-alternator. Next the hot gas convert to the cool gas duct and that gas was again connect with reactor from lower connector. Inside the lower connector they had gas blower.
The diagram illustrates the production of steam using a
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cooled nuclear reactor.
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setup for doing this procedure.

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, a
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cooled nuclear reactor has two main parts which are the main reactor and
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exchanger.
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was connected
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heat
exchanger and the procedure was
continuously
going.
Moreover
, reactor
was covered
by concrete radiation shielding.
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Inside
the concrete, there is a massive tube, its cover
was made
by a pressure vessel.
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Inside
that thing, there are graphite moderators and uranium fuel elements included. Although, graphite moderators are connecting with boron control rods and that rod can manual work.
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,
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inside
the
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exchanger they had spring tube.

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, When the hot
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gas
came to the
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exchanger from the reactor with the upper connector.
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as
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circulator
can operate the pressure of the water and that hot
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was go
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inside
the
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exchanger.
Eventually
,
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ater
was convert to the steam and that steam was going to the turbo-alternator.
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the hot
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gas
convert to the cool
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duct and that
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was again connect with reactor from lower connector.
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blower.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor.

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