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The consumption of fast food in Britain

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The bar chart illustrates the consumption of hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza of different income level where the graph shows the amount of consumptions over time in Britain. Overall, the graph shows the information about the weekly consumption of fast food and the consumption in grams over three decades. The consumption of hamburgers, and fish and chips are increasing over time, mostly consumed by the higher and average income people. The popularity of fish and chips didn’t go up that much after 1970. People from high and average income background more likely to have hamburgers than pizza. Fish and chips has a medium type of popularity among all kinds of people but pizza has always been the last choice between the average and low income people. After 1970, there has been a rise of hamburgers and pizza but the fish and chips were not that popular like the others. Among all of them, hamburger was always the first choice and the amount of consumption was more than any other fast food.
The bar chart illustrates the
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level where the graph
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the amount of
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over time in Britain.

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the information about the weekly
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food and the
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in grams over three decades. The
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of hamburgers, and fish and chips are increasing over time,
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income
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. The popularity of fish and chips didn’t go up that much after 1970.

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from high and average
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background more likely to have hamburgers than pizza. Fish and chips has a medium type of popularity among all kinds of
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pizza has always been the last choice between the average and low
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After 1970, there has been a rise of hamburgers and pizza
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the fish and chips were not that popular like the others. Among all of them, hamburger was always the
first
choice and the amount of
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was more than any other
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food.
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IELTS academic The consumption of fast food in Britain

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4 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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