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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. VBBAA
The given climograph provides detailed information about weather changes in each month in Kolkata. Overall, it is evident from the graph that the temperature and rainfall follow a parallel trend throughout the year. The highest levels of temperature are noticed during the begining of the second half of the year. Moreover, rainfall is heavier at the end of of the first half of the year. The units of measurement are (°C) and (mm) for temperature and precipitation respectively. In terms of temperature, the lowest degrees are common during the end of the year, specifically November and December. However, the temperature follow a climbing upward trend untile the end of May when it reachs about 100 degree. The next six months are well known for their hot weather. During Julay and Augest temperature reachs almost 350 degree. On the other hand, rainfall is quite common during the period between January and May. Moreover, starting from 200 mm in January this value increases almost two times in May at more than 300 mm. Although, the next seven months reserve the same rainy nature, but they start to decline noticeably untile they meet the initial value of precipitation at 200 mm in December.
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climograph
provides detailed information about weather
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changes
in each month in Kolkata.
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that the
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temperature
and rainfall follow a parallel trend throughout the
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year
. The highest levels of
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temperature
are noticed
during the
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begining
of the second half of the
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year
.
Moreover
, rainfall is heavier at the
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end
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of of
the
first
half of the
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year
. The units of measurement are (°C) and (mm) for
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temperature
and precipitation
respectively
.

In terms of
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temperature
, the lowest degrees are common during the
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end
of the
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year
,
specifically
November and December.
However
, the
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temperature
follow a climbing upward trend
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untile
the
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end
of May when it
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reachs
about 100 degree. The
next
six months are well known for their hot weather. During
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Julay
and
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Augest
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temperature
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reachs
almost 350 degree.

On the other hand
, rainfall is quite common during the period between January and May.
Moreover
, starting from 200 mm in January this value increases almost two times in May at more than 300 mm. Although, the
next
seven months reserve the same rainy nature,
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but
they
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start
to decline
noticeably
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untile
they
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meet
the initial value of precipitation at 200 mm in December.
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IELTS academic The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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3 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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