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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. 0q93
The graph illustrates the average temperature and precipitation from January to December in the city of Kolkata. Temperature is measured in Celcius and precipitation is calculated in Millimetres(MM). Overall, Rainfall is very high in July and August with around 350 mm. Other months(Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, Nov, Dec) have very low precipitation which is less than 50 mm. Compare to this Temperature is very high in May with above 30 *C and very low in Jan and Dec which has similarly 20*C. On the one hand, Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, Nov, Dec weather was very cold with below and equal to 50 mm. Jul And Aug have high rainy season months with above 300 mm. On the other hand, The Temperature is very high in Apr, May, Jan because it was the summer season with 30 degrees and above. Other months like Mar, Aug, Jul, Sep, Oct, Nov has similarly Temperature Above are equal to 25 degrees, respectively.
The graph illustrates the average
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temperature
and precipitation from January to December in the city of Kolkata.
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Temperature
is measured
in
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Celcius
and precipitation
is calculated
in
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Millimetres
(MM).

Overall
, Rainfall is
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very
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high
in July and August with around 350 mm. Other months(Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, Nov, Dec) have
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very
low precipitation which is less than 50 mm. Compare to this
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Temperature
is
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very
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high
in May with
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above
30
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*
C and
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low in Jan and Dec which has
similarly
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20*C
.

On the one hand, Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, Nov, Dec weather was
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cold
with below and equal to 50 mm. Jul And Aug have
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high
rainy season months with
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above
300 mm.

On the other hand
, The
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Temperature
is
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high
in Apr, May, Jan
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because
it was
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the summer season
with 30 degrees and
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above
. Other months like Mar, Aug, Jul, Sep, Oct, Nov has
similarly
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Temperature
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Above
are equal to 25 degrees,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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