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The cleverest child you know

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I think a child's mind is mainly depends on the parents and his environment. now I'm going to talk about my neighbor and his child. My neighbor is a young family and they have a daughter who is 5 yo. Despite her age, she knows more than her peers. she knows mathematics until grade 5 and She has flair for telling multiplication table by heart. She can speak in English and now she's learning Russia. They seldom speak Uzbek. She wants to be a mathematician and work at NASA. My neighbor said that his childhood was difficult because his father died when he was 7 years old and he mostly worked. It was difficult for him even to pay tuition fees. but he never gave up, so he is willing to spend all his money teaching his children
I
think
a child's mind is
mainly
depends on the parents and his environment.
now
I'm going to talk about my neighbor and his child. My neighbor is a young
family and
they have a daughter who is 5 yo. Despite her age, she knows more than her peers.
she
knows mathematics until grade
5 and
She has flair for telling multiplication table by heart. She can speak in English and
now
she's learning Russia. They seldom speak Uzbek. She wants to be a mathematician and work at NASA. My neighbor said that his childhood was difficult
because
his father
died
when he was 7 years
old and
he
mostly
worked. It was difficult for him even to pay tuition fees.
but
he never gave up,
so
he is willing to spend all his money teaching his
children
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IELTS academic The cleverest child you know

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