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carbon dioxide was released by individuals from 1967 to 2007.

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The line graph illustrates how much carbon dioxide was released by individuals from 1967 to 2007. It can be seen clearly from the graph that the average CO2 emissions of the UK and Sweden were decreased sharply, while the figures for Italy and Portugal Co2 emissions were increased rapidly. Regarding the United Kingdom, the amount of CO2 released in this country was fell minimally, just around 0, 1 tonnes in the first 10 years but later dropped dramatically from nearly 11 tonnes to 9 tonnes till the end of the period. Besides, between 1967 and 1977, the Swedes C02 emissions experienced a sharp rise of nearly 2 tonnes before a noticeable drop with the figure nearly doubling. The pattern was reversed in the 2 remaining nations. From 1967 to 1977, the average CO2 emissions of Italian climbed sharply by more than 2 tonnes and then continued its upward trend at a slower rate. In the last decade, the figure witnessed a leveling off at nearly 8 tonnes. Similarly. the trend for Portugal was the same with Italy, but at smaller tonnes, beginning with 1 tonne and ending with 5 tonnes.

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