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WRITE ABOUT er dairy products is displayed on the diagram

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The production of milk and other dairy products is displayed on the diagram below. Generally, there are eight stages in the process, beginning with the cows grazing and ending with delivery to the super-markets and shops. To begin with, the most important part in dairy production are cows. Firstly, they are grazed on the grassland. After that, they are taken to a special machine which milk them twice a day. Then, all milk is placed in the refrigeration storage, where it is maintained in the right conditions, so it is not curd. Afterwards, milk is transferred to the tanker which delivers it to Dairy on the daily basis. Following this, the milk has to be pasteurized and, subsequently, turned into cheese, cream and butter. Only after all processing it can be packaged and carried to the groceries shelves where it is completely ready to be purchased. To sum up, the production of dairy products is quite complicated, the milk has to go through eight steps to be on the shop counter.

The production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 and other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
dairy
 products is displayed
 on the diagram below. Generally
, there are eight stages in the process, beginning with the cows grazing and ending with delivery to the super-markets and shops.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 part in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
dairy
 production are cows. Firstly
, they are grazed
 on the grassland. After that, they are taken
 to a special machine which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 them twice a day. Then, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is placed
 in the refrigeration storage, where it is maintained
 in the right conditions, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is not curd. Afterwards, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is transferred
 to the tanker which delivers it to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
Dairy
 on the daily basis. Following this, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be pasteurized
 and, subsequently
, turned into cheese, cream and butter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
after all
 processing it can be packaged
 and carried to the groceries shelves where it is completely ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
.

To sum up, the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
dairy
 products is quite complicated, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 go through eight steps to be on the shop counter. 