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The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. Aoxx
The charts provide information about the weight of Charlestown population in 1955 and 2015. Overall, it can be seen that people with ideal weight are dominant in all age categories over the period. Underweight people decreased while obese and overweight people percentage increased from 1955 to 2015. Looking at the first categories, most of the population which is more than 50% in every age are ideal weighted for both year 1955 and 2015. Obese people were around less than 10% in 1955 and only in age 40-69 then increased to around the average of 30% for all age categories in 2015 similarly with overweight population which increased in all age categories from 20% as the peak high in 1955 age 30-39 then doubled to 40% for the same age category (30-39) and it goes same to the other age categories. In contrast, underweight population increased almost half as much as the first data from 1955 which approximately the average of 40% from all age categories to just half as the number which is under 20% in 2015.
The charts provide information about the weight of Charlestown
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population
in 1955 and 2015.
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that
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with ideal weight are dominant in all
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age
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categories
over the period. Underweight
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people
decreased while obese and overweight
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people
percentage
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increased
from 1955 to 2015.

Looking at the
first
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, most of the
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population
which is more than 50% in every
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age
are ideal weighted for both year 1955 and 2015. Obese
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people
were around less than 10% in 1955 and
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only
in
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age
40-69 then
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increased
to around the average of 30% for all
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age
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in 2015
similarly
with overweight
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population
which
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increased
in all
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age
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from 20% as the peak high in 1955
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age
30-39 then doubled to 40% for the same
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age
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(30-39) and it goes same to the other
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categories.

In contrast
, underweight
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population
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increased
almost half as much as the
first
data from 1955 which approximately the average of 40% from all
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age
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to
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half as the number which is under 20% in 2015.

IELTS academic The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.

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