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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. pR5Pm
The illustrated bar chart below depicts the air pollutions levels from electric generation, transport, and industry among 4 countries (China, America, Japan, Australias) in 2021. Overall, according to the chart, China has the highest pollution levels regardless of electric generation, transport, and industry in contrast with Australia that has the lowest problem in air pollutions. whereas, in America, only transport exploits pollution in the same year. To begin with, Air from the industry is the leading causes of air pollution in china and in japan that reaches 80 PPM and just over 40 ppm respectively, while in America, wherein the main problem came from their transport system causes pollution in their country which just over 60 PPM although industry and electric consumption have remained stable. Moreover, Australia has the lowest pollution from electric generation, transport, and industry and equally divided, which has only just under 20 PPM for all unlike in any other countries that have different proportions.
The illustrated bar chart below depicts the
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levels from
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generation,
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transport
, and
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among 4 countries (China, America, Japan,
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Australias
) in 2021.

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, according to the chart, China has the highest
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levels regardless of
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electric
generation,
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transport
, and
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industry
in contrast
with Australia that has the lowest problem in
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.
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whereas
, in America,
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exploits
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in the same year.

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from the
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is the leading

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causes
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china
and in japan that reaches 80 PPM and
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over 40 ppm
respectively
, while in America, wherein the main problem came from their
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system causes
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in their country which
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over 60 PPM although
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and
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electric
consumption have remained stable.

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, Australia has the lowest
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generation,
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, and
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and
equally
divided, which has
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under 20 PPM for all unlike in any other countries that have
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proportions.

IELTS academic The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

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