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The charts show the sources of eletricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008.

The charts show the sources of eletricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008. WYBqa
The pie charts illustrate the amount of electricity generated using three distinct sources in four nations from 2003 to 2008. Overall, it is clear that nuclear power was by far the least significant source of electricity production, only being exploited in India and Sweden. Meanwhile, the reverse was true for fossil fuels and hydropower over the period shown. To begin with, there was a significant disparity in the quantity of electricity produced from fossil fuels and hydropower in Morocco and Vietnam. Water power provided the vast majority (95%) of Morocco's electricity, compared to fossil fuels, which made up only 5% of total generation. By contrast, this source of energy provided over half (56%) of the electricity in Vietnam, while hydropower contributed just around 44%. Regarding India, electricity production from fossil fuels made up 82%, whereas nuclear and hydropower accounted for just 14 percent and 4%, respectively. However, Sweden got around over half of its electricity from water power (52%) and only a mere fraction (4%) was from fossil fuels. Finally, nuclear power supplied around 44% of Sweden's electricity.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of
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generated using three distinct sources in four nations from 2003 to 2008.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that nuclear
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power
was by far the least significant source of
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electricity
production,
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only
being exploited
in India and Sweden. Meanwhile, the reverse was true for
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fossil
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fuels
and hydropower over the period shown.

To
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begin
with, there was a significant disparity in the quantity of
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electricity
produced from
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fossil
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fuels
and hydropower in Morocco and Vietnam. Water
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power
provided the vast majority (95%) of Morocco's
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electricity
, compared to
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fossil
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fuels
, which made up
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only
5% of total generation. By contrast, this source of energy provided over half (56%) of the
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electricity
in Vietnam, while hydropower contributed
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just
around 44%.

Regarding India,
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production from
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fossil
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fuels
made up 82%, whereas nuclear and hydropower accounted for
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just
14 percent and 4%,
respectively
.
However
, Sweden
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got
around over half of its
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from water
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power
(52%) and
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only
a mere fraction (4%) was from
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fossil
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fuels
.
Finally
, nuclear
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power
supplied around 44% of Sweden's
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electricity
.
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