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The charts show the proportion of fearness in April 2020 and 2021 as well as the rest periods of both years.

The charts show the proportion of fearness in April 2020 and 2021 as well as the rest periods of both years. 7aaa2
The two bar charts compare the amount of anxiety between the month April(in 2020 and 2021) and the years 2020 and 2021. It is clear that people were more aware of the pandemic in 2020 while it decreased in 2021. However, overall, there is a significant rise in the month April compared to the previous April. A very few people were concern about Covid at the beginning of its emergence. In contrast, people awareness of the pandemic took a huge place in the next April, 2021. The fear increased dramatically after a year, which is ridiculous, and the highest amount of panic went to this period(April, 2021). It is guessed (from the given period data) that government and mass public will be fear-free soon, and there will be a declined in the fearness over the rest month of 2021. On the other hand, government was frustrated at the presence of Covid throughout the year 2020, while they showed less fearness over the period of 2021 without the month April.
The two bar charts compare the amount of anxiety between the
month
April(in 2020 and 2021) and the years 2020 and 2021.

It is
clear
that
people
were more aware of the pandemic in 2020 while it decreased in 2021.
However
,
overall
, there is a significant rise in the
month
April compared to the previous April.

A
very
few
people
were concern about
Covid
at the beginning of its emergence.
In contrast
,
people
awareness of the pandemic took a huge place in the
next
April, 2021
. The fear increased
dramatically
after a year, which is ridiculous, and the highest amount of panic went to this period(
April, 2021
). It
is guessed
(from the
given
period data) that
government
and mass public will be fear-free
soon
, and there will be a declined in the
fearness
over the rest
month
of 2021.

On the other hand
,
government
was frustrated
at the presence of
Covid
throughout the year 2020, while they
showed
less
fearness
over the period of 2021 without the
month
April.
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IELTS academic The charts show the proportion of fearness in April 2020 and 2021 as well as the rest periods of both years.

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