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The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below. >> You should write at least 150 words.

The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below. >> Yg96B
A tabular graph had been given which is provided an information regarding the hours of leisure time annually for masses in some land. Overall, it is obvious that maximum number of individuals love to spend thier time watching television and videos from all age groups. According to the given data, it is evident that teenagers spend 1200 hours annually by watching television and videos. Moreover, teens spend similar amount of time 150 hours per year by socialising with four and less poeple and individual exercise also. Furthermore, pupils spend time 350, 450, 100 by socialising with four or more people, group exercise /sport and cinema absolutely. Moving further, age group from 20's to 40's love to spend 1600 hours by watching television. Besides this, 450, 500, 150 spend hours yearly on socialising with four or more people, individual exercise and cinema separately. Additionally, utilize time 700 hours annually by socialising with four or less people and group sport.
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IELTS academic The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below. >>

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