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The charts provide information about people’s travel in one country.

The charts provide information about people’s travel in one country. OM2yy
The report aims to provide information about the number of miles travelled over time in one country during the year 1995 to 2015 as well as the medium of transportation used over the same period. Overall, the number of distance travelled in that country reached its peak in 2005 before experiencing a significant drop later on. As shown in the chart, private transport accounted for the vast majority of travelling mode in all years while the use of public transport was significantly the lowest. In 1995, the transported distance stood at approximately 6, 725 miles and started to rise significantly. By the year 2005, the number of miles travelled reached the highest point at over 7, 100 miles in a year; however, after that year, it began to slip back dramatically to under 6, 700 miles, lower than its starting point in 1995. Focusing on the mode of transportation, private transport accounted for the highest portion in the 20-year period, at approximately 63 per cent. Walking and cycling stood for the second-highest percentage, but its number experienced a slight downward trend in each year from 1995 to 2010 and remained stable until 2015. On the other hand, the use of public transport increased slightly during the same time.
The report aims to provide information about the
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of miles travelled over time in one country during the
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1995 to 2015
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as the medium of transportation
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used
over the same period.

Overall
, the
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of distance travelled in that country reached its peak in 2005
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before
experiencing a significant drop later on. As shown in the chart, private
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transport
accounted for the vast majority of travelling mode in all years while the
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use
of public
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transport
was
significantly
the lowest.

In 1995, the transported distance stood at approximately 6,
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725 miles
and
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started
to rise
significantly
. By the
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2005, the
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of miles travelled reached the highest point at over 7,
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100 miles
in a
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year
;
however
, after that
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, it began to slip back
dramatically
to under 6,
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700 miles
, lower than its starting point in 1995.

Focusing on the mode of transportation, private
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transport
accounted for the highest portion in the
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20-year
period, at approximately 63 per cent. Walking and cycling stood for the second-highest percentage,
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but
its
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number
experienced a slight downward trend in each
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year
from 1995 to 2010 and remained stable until 2015.
On the other hand
, the
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use
of public
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transport
increased
slightly
during the same time.
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IELTS academic The charts provide information about people’s travel in one country.

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