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The charts illustrate the percentage of English students who can communicate in other languages in 2000 and 2010.

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The charts illustrate the percentage of English students who can communicate in other languages in 2000 and 2010. Overall, it is accounted that besides their native language Spanish is the most used tongue over other languages. Within the 10 years of time frame, they become more capable at two other languages which increase by 5 %. From the 1st chart the data state in 2000 where 30 % of students were able to speak Spanish and 10% of them can communicate both German and two other languages. On the other hand, 15 % of them can only master in French alongside another language which name was not revealed in the chart. In 2010 we have seen some improvements in different language skills. Spanish speakers increased by 5% from 2000 and 15 % of students are now able to speak two other languages. There is a common match on both charts is 20 % of them can not speak any other language except their own tongue.
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hand, 15 % of them can
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