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About crime, burglary and car theft.

About crime, burglary and car theft. WmjXK

The line graph illustrates the decade-year modifications that occurred in three different types of lawbreaking (burglary, car theft and robbery) in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that, although burglary was the most common type of crime at the beginning of the period, it decreased gradually and at the end of the period it was in the second place, while car theft and rubbery were the same both at the beginning and the end of the period. Obviously, the number of incidents oppressed by burglary, peaked at 3700 by 2004 which was the highest point of it, whereas the number of car theft and robbery increased slightly by the same period. Interestingly, the amount of occurrences of burglary and robbery plumbed the depths in 2008. In according with the chart stealing cars reached the lowest point in 2006, then changed vaguely over the years and came to the fore at the end of the span. The other sorts of delinquency diversified marginally by 2012

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