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The charts depict sales data for Fairtrade coffee and bananas between 19999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.

The charts depict sales data for Fairtrade coffee and bananas between 19999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. p5x90
The charts depict sales data for Fairtrade coffee and bananas between 19999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. The first table demonstrates sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee between the years of 1999 and 2004. First of all, the highest possible score for Fairtrade in coffee category in 1999 is 3 millions of euros in Switzerland, 2004 sales of coffee is doubled compared to year of 1999 which is 6 million of euro in Switzerland. Coffee fair trade in Denmark is 1. 8 million euro in 1999 which is almost the same amount money as Fairtrade for coffee in UK which is 1. 5 million of euros. In 2004, sales of Fairtrade coffee have become 2 millions of euros in Denmark. 20 millions of euros have been paid in 2004 by UK which is the highest amount of money for coffee across all countries. Lastly, for coffee developing countries have been paid 1 millions of euro in 1999 which is similar to Sweden paid 0. 8 millions of euro for coffee in 1999. Additionally, In 2004, 1. 7 and 1 millions of euros had been paid by Belgium and Sweden which are almost the same. The second table consists of data for sales of Fairtrade- labelled bananas. Firstly, In Switzerland, 15 millions of euros had been paid in 1999 for Fairtrade bananas on the other hand; sales of Fairtrade bananas are 47 millions of euros in 2004 which is the highest amount of money compare to other countries in this category. Developing countries have been paid for bananas 1 and 5. 5 millions of euros in 1999 and 2004 by UK which are similar to each other. In addition to this, sales data for Fairtrade bananas is 0. 6 in 1999, Belgium and 4 millions of euros for the year of 2004 which is four times of amount of money of 1999. In Sweden, 1. 8 millions of euros have been paid for Fairtrade bananas in 1999 which decreased to 1 millions of euros in 2004. The last country is Denmark paid 2 million for fair-trade bananas in 1999 which reduced to 0. 9 million in 2004. In conclusion, In the first table, highest amount of money is 20 millions of euros for Fairtrade coffee in UK, 2004, which means individuals in UK are more likely to consume coffee in 2004. The second implication is that Switzerland paid 47 millions of euros for bananas trade in 2004 which means people in Switzerland is more likely to purchase bananas across all other countries.
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Fairtrade
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and bananas between 19999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.

The
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sales
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Fairtrade-labelled
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coffee
between the years of 1999 and 2004.
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Fairtrade
in
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coffee
category in 1999 is 3
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millions
of euros in Switzerland, 2004
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sales
of
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coffee
is doubled
compared to year of 1999 which is 6
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million
of euro in Switzerland.
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Coffee
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trade in Denmark is 1. 8
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million
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euro
in 1999 which is almost the same
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as
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for
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in UK which is 1. 5
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have become 2
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across all
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, for
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developing
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have been
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1
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of euro in 1999 which is similar to Sweden
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0. 8
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in 1999.
Additionally
, In 2004, 1. 7 and 1
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by Belgium and Sweden which are almost the same.

The second table consists of data for
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Fairtrade
- labelled bananas.
Firstly
, In Switzerland, 15
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in 1999 for
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bananas on the
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hand;
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bananas are 47
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compare to
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countries
in this category. Developing
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have been
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for bananas 1 and 5. 5
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of euros in 1999 and 2004 by UK which are similar to each
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to this,
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bananas is 0. 6 in 1999, Belgium and 4
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of 1999. In Sweden, 1. 8
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bananas in 1999 which decreased to 1
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in UK, 2004, which means individuals in UK are more likely to consume
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in 2004. The second implication is that Switzerland
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47
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people
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bananas across all
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