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The charts depict a brief comparison between three deserts - the Sahara Desert in Africa, the Taklimakan Desert in Asia and the Great Basin Desert in North America.

The charts depict a brief comparison between three deserts - the Sahara Desert in Africa, the Taklimakan Desert in Asia and the Great Basin Desert in North America. KwwOR
The charts depict a brief comparison between three deserts - the Sahara Desert in Africa, the Taklimakan Desert in Asia and the Great Basin Desert in North America. The chart compares the deserts based on 4 categories namely size, average annual rainfall, average temperature and temperature extremes. The Sahara Desert is noticeably the largest desert occupying 9, 000, 000 square kilometers in area while the Taklimakan Desert occupies 337, 600 square kilometers and the Great Basin Desert occupies 305, 775 square kilometers. The Taklimakan Desert has the sparsest rainfall within the annual range of 1 centimeter to 3. 8 centimeters whereas the Great Basin desert experiences the most frequent rainfall within the annual range of 5. 1 centimeters to 51 centimeters. The Sahara desert experiences a moderate rainfall when compared to the other two with an annual range of 7. 6 centimeters to 12. 7 centimeters. The three deserts have similar temperatures during the summer - Sahara and Great Basin at 30degree C, and Taklimakan at 25degree C. However, the winters in the Sahara desert at 13degree C are much warmer than that in Taklimakan desert at -9degree C and Great Basin desert at -8degree C. The highest recorded temperate of the Sahara desert and the Great Basin Desert are nearly the same at 58degree C and 57degree C respectively. On the other hand, the lowest recorded temperature in the Taklimakan desert is -26. 1degree C.
The charts depict a brief comparison between three deserts
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the
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Sahara
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Desert
in Africa, the
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Taklimakan
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Desert
in Asia and the
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Basin
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Desert
in North America. The chart compares the deserts based on 4 categories
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size, average annual
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rainfall
, average
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temperature
and
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temperature
extremes.
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The
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Sahara
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is
noticeably
the largest
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desert
occupying 9, 000, 000 square kilometers in area while the
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Taklimakan
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occupies 337, 600 square kilometers and the
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Basin
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Desert
occupies 305, 775 square kilometers.
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The
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has the sparsest
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rainfall
within the annual range of 1 centimeter to 3. 8 centimeters whereas the
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Basin
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desert
experiences the most frequent
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rainfall
within the annual range of 5. 1 centimeters to 51 centimeters. The
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Sahara
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experiences a moderate
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rainfall
when compared to the other two with an annual range of 7. 6 centimeters to 12. 7 centimeters. The three deserts have similar
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temperatures
during the summer
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30degree
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25degree
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However
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at
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13degree
C are much warmer than that in
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Taklimakan
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-9degree
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Basin
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-8degree
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Sahara
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desert
and the
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Basin
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are
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58degree
C and
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respectively
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temperature
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desert
is -26.
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1degree
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IELTS academic The charts depict a brief comparison between three deserts - the Sahara Desert in Africa, the Taklimakan Desert in Asia and the Great Basin Desert in North America.

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