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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. 2bb2o

The illustrated diagram below depicts the 5 steps on how carbonated drinks are made. Overall, there are 5 crucial steps to produce carbonated drinks. In chronological order, first, water cleaning followed by heating evaporation and carbonation mixing the, filtering and filling and lastly, packaging and transport to the the markets are the crucial steps on successfully Firstly, raw water from the tank will filter and mix with a water softener together with chemicals. Secondly, these mixture will then pump and transport through the use of electric heaters wherein the cooling pipe is connected to the large tank wherein carbon dioxide will evaporate. Moreover, a huge tank is connected to a long pipe wherein water was being transferred after being carbonated. The third step, a huge tank has a different buttons for flavouring, colouring and adding syrup takes place. Furthermore, another filtering and filling are set up to make sure that the items passed the quality control. Lastly, bottles and cans are being separated quickly and putting it a separated boxes.

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 on how carbonated drinks are made
.

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steps
 to produce carbonated drinks. In chronological order, first
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water
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Firstly
, raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvesselcontainer
tank
 will filter and mix with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softener together with chemicals. Secondly
, Did you mean "this mixture" or "these mixtures"?this mixturethese mixtures
these mixture
 will then pump and transport through the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of electric heaters wherein the cooling pipe is connected
 to the large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvesselcontainer
tank
 wherein carbon dioxide will evaporate.

Moreover
, a huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvesselcontainer
tank
is connected
 to a long pipe wherein You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 was being transferred
 after being carbonated
. The third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, a huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvesselcontainer
tank
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different
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buttons
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flavouring
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colouring
 and adding syrup takes place. Furthermore
, another filtering and filling are set
 up to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that the items passed the quality control. Lastly
, bottles and cans are being separated
quickly
 and putting it a separated Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "box"?box
boxes
. 