Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The distribution of Australian citizens in different age groups who were engaged in regular physical activity in 2010 is depicted in the given bar diagram.

The distribution of Australian citizens in different age groups who were engaged in regular physical activity in 2010 is depicted in the given bar diagram. Overall, the proportion of Australian women who did regular exercise was higher than their male counterparts, except in case of the youngest age group. It is clear from the chart that more than half of the Australian women between 35 and 64 were involved in some kind of physical activity, and this was the highest in the 45 to 54 age group (53. 3%). Men in these three age groups (35 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64) were less-interested in performing physical activities, but the rate of those who were involved is seen increased in the older age groups (from 39. 5 to 45. 1%). However, this proportion is seen almost leveled in case of those who were over 65 (almost 47%). The proportional disparity between the two genders was approximately 6. 5% in the age group 25 to 34. The only exception was reported in case of the youngest age group (15 to 24), in which the male proportion (52. 8) stood higher than the females’ (47. 7).

The distribution of Australian citizens in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
were engaged
 in regular physical activity in 2010 is depicted
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 bar diagram.

Overall
, the proportion of Australian women You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 did regular exercise was higher than their male counterparts, except in case of the youngest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the chart that more than half of the Australian women between 35 and 64 were involved
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of physical activity, and this was the highest in the 45 to 54 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 (53. 3%). This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
Men
 in these three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 (35 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64) were less-interested in performing physical activities, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the rate of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
were involved
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 increased in the older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 (from 39. 5 to 45. 1%). However
, this proportion is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 almost leveled in case of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 were over 65 (almost 47%). The proportional disparity between the two genders was approximately 6. 5% in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 25 to 34.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 exception was reported
 in case of the youngest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 (15 to 24), in which the male proportion (52. 8) stood higher than the females’ (47. 7). 