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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 m1Wo8
The pie chart compares the feedback given by 100 visitors to the parkway hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service in the year 2005 and 2010. Overall, at the beginning of the period satisfactory was the most significant rating. At the end of the period, good has became the largest rating and lowest percentage for rating of customer is poor and very poor. In the year 2005, excellent rating for customer service, it accounted for 5% and experienced a five fold rise to 28% in 2010. As regards, good rating from guest, it comprised of 14% in 2005, which increased to 39% in 2010. The initial figure of poor feedback was 215 in 2005 and an decline of 9% was observed at the end. Very poor rating to hotel, which had the ratio of 15% in the beginning, fell to 4% in 2010. The satisfactory rating for customer service declined by a difference of 28%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010

Academic
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4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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