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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts illustrate the reasons of going to work with bicycle and car. Overall, it can be evidently seen that the highest reasons of cycling to work were due to health/fitness and less pollution. When it comes to driving to work, the most cause of going to work like this is because of being safety. In terms of cycling to work, the statistics of Health/fitness and less pollution is equal to each other, with 30%. No parking problems and no charges are almost the same statistics, former one is 15% and latter one is 13%. Faster than driving is the lowest reason among these, with 12%. With regard to the reasons for driving to work, comfort is the highest cause among other categories, with 40%. Distance follows comfort reason, with 21%. The causes of speed and carriage are add to each other, with 14%. Safety is the least choosing reason, its statistic is 11%.
The two pie charts illustrate the
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were due to health/fitness and less pollution. When it
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, the most cause of going to
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of being safety.

In terms of cycling to
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, the statistics of Health/fitness and less pollution is equal to each other, with 30%. No parking problems and no charges are almost the same statistics, former one is 15% and latter one is 13%. Faster than driving is the lowest
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among these, with 12%.

With regard to the
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for driving to
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, comfort is the highest cause among other categories, with 40%. Distance follows comfort
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, with 21%. The causes of speed and carriage are
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to each other, with 14%. Safety is the least choosing
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, its statistic is 11%.

IELTS academic The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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