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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. 2bKMj
The two pie charts illustrate the various aspects of employees who prefer both cycling and car for work. Overall, it seems that the majority of the people do cycling for work because of health and pollution reasons. Conversely, those who travel by car want to have a comfortable journey and to travel long distances. Turning to the first chart, we can observe that health and fitness and Less pollution are the two major reasons workers prefer bicycles to work with a proportion of 30% each respectively. 15% of employees choose bicycle due to parking problems. In addition, 13% of people consider it as a cheaper mode of transport than driving by car. Surprisingly, 12% of people mentioning that they are reaching quickly to the office while traveling via bicycle than by car. Taking a closer look at the second chart, we can see that two-fifth of the people prefer cars because of the comfort. Traveling more distance to work is the second most preferred reason for workers to choose cars as their mode of transport. Safety and assets need to carry for work are the next two reasons followed by distance to work shares an equal amount of proportion with 14% each. Finally, 11% of people prefer driving because it is faster than cycling this contrasts with the cyclists who prefer cycles because it is faster than driving.
The two pie charts illustrate the various aspects of employees who
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both cycling and
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car
for work.

Overall
, it seems that the majority of the
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people
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do cycling
for
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work
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because
of health and pollution
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reasons
.
Conversely
, those who travel by
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car
want to have a comfortable journey and to travel long distances.

Turning to the
first
chart, we can observe that health and fitness and Less pollution are the two major
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reasons
workers
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prefer
bicycles to
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work
with a proportion of 30% each
respectively
. 15% of employees choose bicycle due to parking problems.
In addition
, 13% of
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people
consider it as a cheaper mode of transport than driving by
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car
.
Surprisingly
, 12% of
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people
mentioning that they are reaching
quickly
to the office while traveling via bicycle than by car.

Taking a closer look at the second chart, we can
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see
that two-fifth of the
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people
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prefer
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cars
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because
of the comfort. Traveling more distance to
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work
is the second most preferred
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reason
for workers to choose
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cars
as their mode of transport. Safety and assets need to carry for
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work
are the
next
two
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reasons
followed by distance to
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work
shares an equal amount of proportion with 14% each.
Finally
, 11% of
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people
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prefer
driving
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because
it is faster than cycling this contrasts with the cyclists who
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prefer
cycles
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because
it is faster than driving.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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