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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who are able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who are able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Pl8E
The two pie charts provide information about the variation in the ratio of students speaking distinct languages in addition to English at one University in England over the decade between 2000 and 2010. The proportion of students speaking only English degraded by 10 percent over the period of ten years and students speaking one or more than one other language(other than French, German, and Spanish) in addition to English had slightly increased. However, the rate of students who used to speak only a particular language tends to have a different impact over the decade, in which French-speaking scholars show the downfall, while Spanish-speaking scholars show an upward trend. Despite other trends, German-speaking scholars show no change in their ratio. Overall, there is no change in the proportion of undergrads speaking another language with English and any particular language other than English to communicate with each other during the period of ten years.
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impact over the decade, in which French-speaking scholars
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the downfall, while Spanish-speaking scholars
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an upward trend. Despite
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trends, German-speaking scholars
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in their ratio.

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in the proportion of undergrads speaking another
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during the period of ten years.

IELTS academic The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who are able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

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