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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. rERN
The figure illustrates the design flow of a wave-energy machine and its location by selecting and reporting of the viewing of main part of features and to make the comparisions very relevant. Wave-energy machine has the features of design flow consits of a two chambers one is substantially moving upward direction adn the other is downward direction in which through the water levels rise up. The electricity generator is the main body of this machine in which the turbine is main part for the flow and through the turbine the air flows immersed from upward and bottom directions, beow thw water levels will rose up and the flow will risen the level and the wave that is directed is into the machine that the water levels slightly increase. In the location overview we have a two machines far a path and that is wave-energy machines and we have two waves associated the one that is far distance has a low output measured and it has a small waves occur and the costs related to the small wave is low installation. another is the large waves that are occured and it has a significant high output and the costs related is high installation. comparision of this machines and the locations are of slightly similar and some diverse machines tells about the internal structure detialed and the location tells where its is located.
The figure illustrates the design
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flow
of a wave-energy
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machine
and its
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location
by selecting and reporting of the viewing of main part of features and to
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make
the
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comparisions
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very
relevant.

Wave-energy
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machine
has the features of design
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flow
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consits
of a two chambers one is
substantially
moving upward direction
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adn
the other is downward direction in which through the water
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levels
rise up. The electricity generator is the main body of this
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machine
in which the turbine is main part for the
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flow
and through the turbine the air
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flows
immersed from upward and bottom directions,
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beow
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thw
water
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levels
will rose up and the
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flow
will
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risen
the
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level
and the
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wave
that
is directed
is into the
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machine
that the water
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levels
slightly
increase. In the
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location
overview we have a two
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machines
far a path and
that is
wave-energy
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machines and
we have two
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waves
associated the one
that is
far distance has a low output measured and it has a
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small
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waves
occur and the costs related to the
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small
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wave
is low installation.
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another
is the large
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waves
that are
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occured
and it has a significant high output and the costs related is high installation.

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comparision
of
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this
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machines
and the
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locations
are of
slightly
similar and
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some
diverse
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machines
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tells
about the internal structure
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detialed
and the
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location
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tells
where its
is located
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
231 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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