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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. MAnN
The six pie charts give information about the consumption of water around different parts of the world for three distinct purposes. Overall, in all six areas of the world, on average, the most significant purpose of water consumption is Agriculture, which together accounted for approximately 66% of water usage, while Dommestic purpose accounted for the least amount of consumption of water. Water utilization for Agricultural motive is highest by Central Asia with 88% followed by Africa, South East Asia, South America and North America in decreasing order with 84%, 81%, 71%, and 39% respectively and lowest by Europe with 32%. Industrial objective of water consumption comprised of overall 22% in which Europe topped the list with 53% usage and Central Asia is the one with least usage. From all six countries, household usage of water is topmost for South America which constitutes 19% and with slight difference minimal in Central Asia and South East Asia holding the same amount of usage accounts for 7%.
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is Agriculture, which together accounted for approximately 66% of
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by Central Asia with 88% followed by Africa, South East Asia, South America and North America in decreasing order with 84%, 81%, 71%, and 39%
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Industrial objective of
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and Central Asia is the one with
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From all six countries, household
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is topmost for South America which constitutes 19% and with slight difference minimal in Central Asia and South East Asia holding the same amount of
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accounts for 7%.
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