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The charts below show the proportion of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportion of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. r3Mp
The charts shown give the percentage of British students capable of speaking other languages in 2000 and 2010 at one English University. Overall both charts show a similar trend, with the largest portion of British students speaking Spanish while also demonstrating how the number of British Students Speaking no other language has decreased over time. An increasingly large number of Undergraduates from this particular College are able to speak Spanish, with 30 % of the students during 2000 and 35% during 2010, however a considerable number of students speak no other language or French in 2000 contrary to 2010 when they significantly decreased to 10%. Despite the decrease in the percent of students managing to speak in French and Two other languages the amount of students reporting the could speak Spanish and another language increased with the marked decline of students speaking no other language, while the percent of German speakers stayed consistent at 10%.
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in 2000 and 2010 at one English University.

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speaking Spanish while
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Speaking no
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has decreased over time.

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Spanish, with 30 % of the
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during 2000 and 35% during 2010,
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or French in 2000 contrary to 2010 when they
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, while the percent of German speakers stayed consistent at 10%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the proportion of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

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