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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. wBxEY
The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of water consumed by three sectors, that is, Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic around the world in the six areas (North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia) Firstly, while the majority of water consumption in the Industrial sector is observed in the European and North American countries (53% and 48% respectively), the use of water in the industries of Central Asia plummets to 5%, closely followed by Africa and South East Asia. The former accounting for a meagre 7% and the latter about 12%. Secondly, the utilization of water for agricultural purposes is maximum in Asia and Africa which is between 81 to 88 percent; meanwhile the consumption is considerably less in Europe and North America. Lastly, the domestic sector is to shown to utilize the minimum amount of water when compared to other sectors in any given areas of the world. The least consumption being 7% in South East Asia and the highest in South America approximately 19%
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consumed by three
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,
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, Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic around the world in the six areas (North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia)

Firstly
, while the majority of
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consumption in the Industrial
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is observed
in the European and North American countries (53% and 48%
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in the industries of Central Asia plummets to 5%,
closely
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7% and the latter about 12%.

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, the utilization of
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for agricultural purposes is maximum in Asia and Africa which is
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between 81 to 88
percent; meanwhile the consumption is
considerably
less in Europe and North America.

Lastly
, the domestic
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is to shown to utilize the minimum amount of
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when compared to other
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in any
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areas of the world. The least consumption being 7% in South East Asia and the highest in South America approximately 19%
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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