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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. dK8d
The pie charts exhibit the usage of water for Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic purposes in six different regions of the world. Most of the regions reflect a higher usage of water for agriculture and a relatively lower usage for domestic reasons. Europe shows usage of water mostly for Industrial causes whereas Central Asia shows usage of water mostly for Agricultural causes. The Europeans use more than half of the water for industrial means and 32% for agricultural means. On contrary, the Central Asians use 88% of water for agriculture and only 5% for industry. The other three regions Africa, South East Asia, and South America also have a higher percentage of using water for agricultural means, that is 84%, 88%, and 71% respectively. North Americans follow the trajectory of the Europeans in using water and hold a higher percentage for Industrial purposes. We can conclude that Asians are more dependent on farming for a living and as a result spends more water for agriculture and the westerners use more water for industrial reasons.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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