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The charts below show the changes in population size, birth rate and death rate for New Zealand from 1700 to 2000.

The charts below show the changes in population size, birth rate and death rate for New Zealand from 1700 to 2000. y755P
The graphs indicate us the alterations of in population dimension, birth degree and death degree for New Zealand between 1700 and 2000. İn general, New Zealand was reaching the highest level in 2000 on general amount of the population. İt was the lowest population in 1700 which is the New Zealand. When looked in detail, the most of death rate was in 1800. Then 1700 was coming its behind. İn 1800 rate of birth was the highest at the graph. At the same time there was the most death rate. the difference between rate of birth and death, approximately 1 million people. İn more details, The lowest death in 2000. And also number of the death was the lowest. İn 2000 population increasing constant minimum we compare to others. İn 1900 seems stable according to each per years. There was 2 millions death and there was 3 million birth at least in that years.
The graphs indicate us the alterations of in
population
dimension,
birth
degree and death degree for New Zealand between 1700 and 2000.

İn
general, New Zealand was reaching the highest level in 2000 on general amount of the
population
.
İt
was the lowest
population
in 1700 which is the New Zealand.

When looked in detail, the
most of death
rate
was in 1800. Then 1700 was coming its behind.
İn
1800
rate
of
birth
was the highest at the graph. At the same time there was the most death
rate
.
the
difference between
rate
of
birth
and death, approximately 1 million peo
ple.
İn
more deta
ils, Th
e lowest death in 2000. And also
num
ber of the death was the lowest.
İn
2000
population
increasing constant minimum we compare to others.
İn
1900 seems stable according to each per years. There was 2 millions death and there was 3 million
birth
at least in that years.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the changes in population size, birth rate and death rate for New Zealand from 1700 to 2000.

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