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Two pie charts show information about amount of energy use in Australian household

Two pie charts show information about amount of energy use in Australian household obggB

The first pie chart illustrates percentage of energy which is used in Australian household including six different categories, and the second pie chart shows the amount of the green house gas which is produced because of consuming this energy. Overall, what stands out from the pie charts is that the highest emount of energy is used in heating but water heating is the biggest source of green house gas emissions. The highest amount of energy which is used in Australian house is heating with 42 %. The water heating comes in the second place at just under a third. The third popular energy is refrigeration which it accounts for 7 percent. The last popular energy among Australian is cooling which it is half of lightening at 2 and 4 percent respectively. Regarding the second pie chart water for heating with 32% produces the highest amount of green house gas which it is a bit more than other appliances which comes the second place at almost 30. The amount of emission from heating is 15% which has approximately same amount as refrigeration at 14 that it is the half of the energy which is used. Cooling and heating are the two last source of emissions at 3 and 8 % in turn.

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