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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. do9N6
The three pie charts illustrate how much nutrients allocate in four diverse kinds of meals in the Unites state of America, the overconsumption of which can have pernicious impact on health. Looking at the details, as regards snacks, which is accounted for 14% of sodium and experience a more three-fold increase to 42% of added sugar. In contrast, these figure fell to double at 21% cones from saturated fate. Similarly, the consumption of sodium in during breakfast consist of 14% and is slightly growth of 2% ranging from saturated fate. At 16%, the percentage of added sugar consumed during breakfast is the same as that of saturated fate. With regards to, the amount of sodium is intakes at dinner, at 43%, is higher than that of saturated fat and added sugar, 37% and 23%. Likewise, in terms of sodium and added sugar made up 29% and 19%, at lunch. Whereas, these figure rose to more than a quarter to 26% of saturated fate. Overall, it is noticeable that, the levels of sodium and saturated fate in dinner are the highest. Meanwhile, snacks contains the higher proportion of added sugar amongest the four examined meals.
The three pie charts illustrate how much nutrients allocate in four diverse kinds of meals in the Unites state of America, the overconsumption of which can have pernicious impact on health. Looking at the
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made up 29% and 19%, at lunch.
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in dinner are the highest. Meanwhile, snacks contains the higher proportion of
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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