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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. m19NA
The given bar chart illustrates the average of males and females who succeed the driving test over the span of 30 years in one Asian country. Overall, there was an increase in the percentage of women and men who managed to pass the driving test during the given period. Furthermore women were the ones who suceeded the most with the highest rates in the diagram. During the period from 1990 and 2010 the numbers of women passing their driving test outnumbered the men. In addition, as the graph shows, the average of women passing the driving test had graduallly climbed from almost 50 % in 1980 to slightly under 70 % in 2000, and thenit dropped a little to reach approximately 65%. On the other hand, the percentage of men who got their drinving licence in 1980, was just under 30%, 20% less comparing with women in the same year, This average kept rising to reach nearly 40% in 1990 and almost 50% in 2000 and 2010.
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bar chart illustrates the average of males and females
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succeed the
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driving
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test
over the span of 30 years in one Asian country.

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women
and
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men
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who
managed to pass the
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driving
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test
during the
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period.
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Furthermore
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were the ones
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suceeded
the most with the highest rates in the diagram.

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from 1990 and 2010
the numbers of
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women
passing their
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driving
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test
outnumbered the
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men
.
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as the graph
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, the average of
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women
passing the
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driving
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test
had
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graduallly
climbed from almost 50 % in 1980 to
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to reach approximately 65%.

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men
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got
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drinving
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in 1980, was
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under 30%, 20% less comparing with
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women
in the same year, This average
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kept
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40% in 1990 and almost 50% in 2000 and 2010.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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