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the charts below show information about travel to and from UK and about most popular countries

the charts below show information about travel to and from UK and about most popular countries m21rn

The line chart depicts the number of UK visitors and foreigners from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the number of UK visitors in Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain and France. Overall, the number of domestic and foreign tourists has thrived throughout the years. In 1999, France was the most attractive destination for UK residents. From 1979 to 1986, the number of the overseas residents travelling to UK increased lightly from 10 million to 12 million while that of UK tourists had the same number at first but then increased twofold. Since then, the later grew significantly and peaked at 50 million, whereas the former only reached about 28 million in 1999. On the other hand, in 1999, Turkey, Greece and USA welcomed about 3-4 million UK visitors. Meanwhile, there were about 9 million UK tourists choosing to travel to Spain. However, France was still the first ranked country to have most visitors who come from UK, about 12 million.

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