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The supplied maps delineate the developmental activities occurred in a city over a period of 20 years from 1990 to 2010. Overall, as we can see the land had undergone a drastic change over this period. Also, all the farmlands are disappeared in this time span of 20years. In the beginning, to the east of the river, there are villages and in the latter they were demolished and a hotel was erected in that area. And also all the farmlands vanished and that specific land was occupied by a part of the newly formed lake. Also, a bunch of mountains that shined in early 1990 are significantly reduced in 2010. After that, Rare plants and animals situated to the west of the stagnate river and the mountains below them are eventually replaced and the place was further used for the production of electricity. consequently, there was a dam built in the middle of the river in order to restrict the water flow to generate power. Also, the early existing Ancient structures and forests too were destroyed and the lake expanded in that area. only a couple of mountains that existed alongside the forest remained as they are throughout the time period.
The supplied maps delineate the developmental

activities occurred in a city over a period of

20 years from 1990 to 2010.

Overall
, as we can
see
the land had undergone

a drastic
change
over this period.
Also
, all the

farmlands
are disappeared
in this time span of 20years.

In the beginning, to the east of the river, there are

villages and in the latter they
were demolished
and

a hotel
was erected
in that area. And
also
all the farmlands

vanished and that specific land
was occupied
by a part of the

newly
formed lake.
Also
, a bunch of mountains that shined in

early 1990 are
significantly
reduced
in 2010.

After that, Rare plants and animals situated to the west of
the stagnate
river

and the mountains below them are
eventually
replaced and the place was
further


used
for the production of electricity.
consequently
, there was a dam built in the middle of the river in order to restrict the water flow to generate power.
Also
, the early existing Ancient structures and forests too were
destroyed
and the lake expanded in that area.
only
a couple of mountains that existed alongside the forest remained as they are throughout the time period.
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