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the diagram shows the process in which a tourist resort can develop and grow. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.

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The diagram illustrates some steps in which the tourist area can be improved. There are a number of points that contribute to this. Overall, there is a clear connection between the process and the chain of hotels. Opening and increasing the number of hotels can lead to economics improvement. Other companies will be attracted to the area, the number of jobs will maximize, and the tax revenues will go up. Firstly, the settle of new hotels, will create directly jobs, moreover the local businesses will get considreably better. Besides, a lot of others comanies could be attracted to the area, and this will lead to a better improvement of that city life. While the income in the local area will increase, there can be some missleadings, for example money lost through leakage. Although, the city will become a more popular turist destination, so it will be a plus for future re-investments.
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steps in which the tourist
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the process and the chain of hotels. Opening and increasing the number of hotels can lead to economics improvement. Other
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, the number of jobs will maximize, and the tax revenues will go up.

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considreably
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comanies
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, and this will lead to a better improvement of that city life. While the income in the local
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will increase, there can be
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IELTS academic the diagram shows the process in which a tourist resort can develop and grow.

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