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Friend like brother to me

Friend like brother to me Nlkwb
{I’m not forgiven, I do not forget, I’ll remember everything} anonymous always said. When at first hear that I think it’s was bullshit but after time passed, I understand this word. sometimes you must not forgive someone, probably you should say why? Because they can’t understand your love. like today I always wait for my friends he is a good guy but sometimes he bothers me like annoying. Today at school he didn’t pay attention to me so I decided to trust nobody in the world. I feel lonely but that’s ok … one-day ill progress and never and never don’t keep my mind busy with that’s bullshits While I am writing I’m not great I messed up the scores I’m confused. I want to good relationship with a good girl. nobody talks to me I’m such an idiot why do I always take damage from my best friend? I hope one-day people will respond to my love. Life is fully bullshit, I missed my childhood, one day one man told me don’t grow up, I laugh at him but now I get what he said. Ill does not advise because you must earn Experience, lessons, pain, heartbreak, and loneliness to understand what is the world is. How do we meet together? When I was in fourth grade I saw him with his cousin, he wears army Tops and Shorts with sandals, He always played with the phone. That was the first time I saw him and then after 3 years, I saw him at guidance school. We become friends and then we start our relationship. He’s a good guy, I like him. We always fight with each other, laugh together, have fun and We do high school violations. I smoke my first cigarette with him, I love that memory. I have lots of friends, but not best friends.
{I’m not forgiven, I do not forget, I’ll remember everything} anonymous always said. When at
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not forgive someone,
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you should say why?
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he bothers me like annoying.

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at school he didn’t pay attention to me
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I decided to trust nobody in the world. I feel lonely
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that’s ok … one-day ill progress and never and never don’t
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my mind busy with that’s bullshits While I am writing I’m not great I messed up the scores I’m confused. I want to
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relationship with a
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girl.
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nobody
talks to me I’m such an idiot why do I always take damage from my best friend?

I hope one-day
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people
will respond to my
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. Life is
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bullshit, I missed my childhood, one day one
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me don’t grow up, I laugh at him
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I
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what he said.

Ill does not advise
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you
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earn Experience, lessons, pain, heartbreak, and loneliness to understand what is the world is.

How do we
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together?

When I was in fourth grade I
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saw
him with his cousin, he wears army Tops and Shorts with sandals, He always played with the phone. That was the
first
time I
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saw
him and then after 3 years, I
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saw
him at guidance school. We become
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friends
and then we
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start
our relationship.

He’s a
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good
guy, I like him. We always fight with each other, laugh together, have
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fun and
We do high school violations.

I smoke my
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cigarette with him, I
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love
that memory. I have lots of
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,
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IELTS academic Friend like brother to me

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8 paragraphs
309 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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