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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 bBoW
The four pie charts depict data about the avarage ages of residents of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and prediction for 2050Overall, in both countries, the general trend is for a predicted increase in the population of people ages 60 and declination of people ages 0-14It can be seen from 2 charts in yemen, more than half of population was children from 0 to 14 years old in 2000, however, it is forecasted to drop by 13, 1% by 2050. In contrast, the percentage of the age of 15 to 59 also rose considerably from 46, 3% to 57, 3%. The figure in group of elderly will grow steadily by 2, 1% to 5, 7% in 2050 Moving to Italy, in 2000, both people under 14 years old and aged from 15-59 are predicted to fall from 14, 3% to 11, 5% and 61, 6% to 46, 2% respectively. Proportion at the age of 60 stood at 24, 1% in 2000 and rose dramatically up to the figure of 42, 3%
The four pie charts depict data about the
avarage
ages
of residents of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and prediction for 2050Overall, in both countries, the general trend is for a predicted increase in the population of
people
ages
60 and declination of
people
ages
0-14It can be
seen
from 2 charts in
yemen
, more than half of population was children from 0 to 14 years
old
in 2000,
however
, it
is forecasted
to drop by 13, 1% by 2050.
In contrast
, the percentage of the
age
of 15 to 59
also
rose
considerably
from 46, 3% to 57, 3%. The figure in group of elderly will grow
steadily
by 2, 1% to 5, 7% in 2050 Moving to Italy, in 2000, both
people
under 14 years
old
and aged from 15-59
are predicted
to fall from 14, 3% to 11, 5% and 61, 6% to 46, 2%
respectively
. Proportion at the
age
of 60 stood at 24, 1% in 2000 and rose
dramatically
up to the figure of 42, 3%
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