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The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. OM3x3
The given charts below gives the information about the way in which water was utilised world wide and in some selected countries in the year 2000. Overall, it is clear from the pie chart that it depicts an average use of water nation wide and the bar chart shows us the water spend in some countries in specific sectors. In the year 2000, the pie chart particularly indicted the usage of water all around the globe into three categories namely, agriculture, domestic and industrial the unit used is percentage. In general around 70% of the water consumption was made use in agricultural sector and the lowest was spent on industrial and domestic needs. Furthermore, the bar graphs showcases some countries selectively thta is China, India, New Zealand and Canada. To be more precise the highest ammount of water was used on India for agricultural needs 92% and the lowest in Canada. Comparing the industrial sectors water usage was being seen in New Zealand with the highest percentage of 46 and India at lowest with 5 percentage. Lastely considering the Industrial use here Canada at the significantly highest position with the percentage of 80 and India with the lowest of about 3percent only.
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below gives the information about the way in which
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world wide
and in
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some
selected countries in the year 2000.

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, it is
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clear
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that it depicts an average
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use
of
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water
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nation wide
and the bar
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chart
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shows
us the
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spend in
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some
countries in specific sectors.

In the year 2000, the pie
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particularly
indicted the usage of
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water
all around the globe into three categories
namely
, agriculture, domestic and
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industrial
the unit
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is
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percentage
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around 70% of the
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consumption
was made
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use
in agricultural sector and the
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lowest
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industrial
and domestic needs.

Furthermore
, the bar graphs showcases
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countries
selectively
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is China, India, New Zealand and Canada. To be more precise the highest
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on India for agricultural needs 92% and the
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lowest
in Canada. Comparing the
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industrial
sectors
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water
usage was being
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seen
in New Zealand with the highest
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percentage
of 46 and India at
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with 5
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Industrial
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.

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