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The charts below give information about the amount spent on different form of advertising.Summarize and compare the charts

The charts below give information about the amount spent on different form of advertising. Summarize and compare the charts KnY9w
The pie chart illustrates the estimated expenditure in 2005 the measure used is billions of dollars while the bar chart plotted the estimated change in expenditure in 2006 in percentage. overall, both graphs depict the contrast between the expenditure of 2005 and 2006. The pie chart compares the expenditure (TV, Direct Mail, Newspapers, Radio, Magazines, Internet) in billions of dollars (63. 3, 57. 2, 49, 21, 13, 8. 8, respectively). From the graph we can see that the three most spending are TV, Direct Mail and Newspaper representing more than 50% of the graph The bar chart contrasts the same data, however, a year forward and its data is in percentage. It is clear from the graph that the internet had the most change between both years coming from the last position and passing over to the first position in expenses.
The pie
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illustrates the estimated
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expenditure
in 2005 the measure
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used
is billions of dollars while the bar
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plotted the estimated
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change
in
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expenditure
in 2006 in percentage.
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overall
, both graphs depict the contrast between the
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expenditure
of 2005 and 2006.

The pie
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compares the
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expenditure
(TV, Direct Mail, Newspapers, Radio, Magazines, Internet) in billions of dollars (63. 3, 57. 2, 49, 21, 13, 8. 8,
respectively
). From the graph we can
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that the three most spending are TV, Direct Mail and Newspaper representing more than 50% of the
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graph


The bar
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contrasts the same data,
however
, a year forward and its data is in percentage. It is
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clear
from the graph that the internet had the most
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change
between both years coming from the last position and passing over to the
first
position in expenses.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about the amount spent on different form of advertising. Summarize and compare the charts

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