Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the unemployment conditions in Australian cities and countryside in all the 4 quarters of 2012. All in all, the proportion of people without a job has seen drastic ups and downs in countryside as well as in the Australian cities during 2012. Unemployment was majorly seen in the villages during the first quarter contrastingly seen more in towns during the end of the year. During the first quarter of 2012, only a little more than 2% of urban population was unemployed whereas the rural regions faced above 6% unemployment. Same was maintained in the third quarter in cities but the number had reduced amounting to below 6% in the villages of Australia. The issue was raised by approximately 2% in the second quarter meanwhile slid down almost 2% in cities and villages respectively. Marginal difference to 5% was seen by the end of 2012 in both the Australian areas.

The line graph illustrates the unemployment conditions in Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 and countryside in all the 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcottagecabindorm
quarters
 of 2012.

All in all, the proportion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 without a job has You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticelookrecognizeregardwatchexamine
seen
 drastic ups and downs in countryside as well
 as in the Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 during 2012. Unemployment was majorly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticelookrecognizeregardwatchexamine
seen
 in the villages during the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
quarter
Possible spelling mistake found.contrasting
contrastingly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticelookrecognizeregardwatchexamine
seen
 more in towns during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year.

During the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
quarter
 of 2012, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 more than 2% of urban population was unemployed
 whereas the rural regions faced above 6% unemployment. Same was maintained
 in the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
quarter
 in Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).cities,
cities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the number had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 amounting to below 6% in the villages of Australia.

The issue was raised
 by approximately 2% in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
quarter
 meanwhile slid down almost 2% in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 and villages respectively
. Marginal difference to 5% was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticelookrecognizeregardwatchexamine
seen
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2012 in both the Australian areas. 