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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The given pie charts provide information about the proportion of using water for various aims in six regions of the world. As an overall trend, 4 sectors of the world used more water for agricultural purposes, whereas 2 other zones, namely North America and Europe, demonstrated the largest amount of water usage for the industry. According to the information provided, the largest percentage of using water was for agricultural products about 90% in Central Asia and roughly 85% in Africa. The same pattern was repeated for South America and South East Asia with 81% and 78% respectively. While those 4 districts spent water for cultivation use, North America and Europe were in the last positions for utilizing water in agriculture with 39% and 32%. Besides that, North America and Europe exploited 53% and 48% of their water. The one difference being that 4 areas used less water than North America and Europe and they even did not exceed 15% each. And finally, the least proportion of water usage was reported for domestic use with less than 20% in all 6 regions of the world.
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for various aims in six regions of the world. As an
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used
more
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for agricultural purposes, whereas 2 other zones,
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North
America and Europe, demonstrated the largest amount of
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usage for the industry.

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was for agricultural products about 90% in Central Asia and roughly 85% in Africa. The same pattern
was repeated
for South America and South East Asia with 81% and 78%
respectively
. While those 4 districts spent
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water
for cultivation
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,
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North
America and Europe were in the last positions for utilizing
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in agriculture with 39% and 32%.
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that,
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North
America and Europe exploited 53% and 48% of their
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. The one difference being that 4 areas
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used
less
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than
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America and
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Europe and
they even did not exceed 15% each. And
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, the least proportion of
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usage
was reported
for domestic
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with less than 20% in all 6 regions of the world.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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