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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart graph illustrates data on population trends in Japon on past, present, and future expectations, and the above table graph demonstrates information about the population amount aged 65 years or older within millions and percentage of the total population for four specific years: 1950, 2005, 2035, and 2055. Overall, in terms of the total population increase and reach the peak in 2005. Even though the population trends decrease in the future prediction, the numbers of people who are 65 years or over-aged have an upward trend in 1950, 2005, 2035, and 2055. After 2005 the population slightly decrease until the present, in addition to forecasts that decrease continue in the future and after 2005, the population fell by about 15. 4 million and reach 110 million in 2035. Future predictions indicate the population in 2055 is nearly the same within 1950, 89, 9 million and 84, 1 million respectively. A marked difference in the past and future trends is the percentage of aged 65 years or older the figure almost ten times 4, 9% to 41, 0%, in 1950 and 2055 respectively.
The chart graph illustrates data on
population
trends
in
Japon
on past, present, and
future
expectations, and the above table graph demonstrates information about the
population
amount aged 65 years or older within
millions
and percentage of the total
population
for four specific years: 1950, 2005, 2035, and 2055.

Overall
, in terms of the total
population
increase and reach the peak in 2005.
Even though
the
population
trends
decrease in the
future
prediction, the numbers of
people
who are 65 years or over-aged have an upward
trend
in 1950, 2005, 2035, and 2055.

After 2005 the
population
slightly
decrease until the present,
in addition
to forecasts that decrease continue in the
future
and after 2005, the
population
fell by about 15. 4
million
and reach 110
million
in 2035.
Future
predictions indicate the
population
in 2055 is
nearly
the same within 1950, 89, 9
million
and 84, 1
million
respectively
. A marked difference in the past and
future
trends
is the percentage of aged 65 years or older the figure almost ten times 4, 9% to 41, 0%, in 1950 and 2055
respectively
.
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