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The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014

The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014 bL1q

The given line graph depicts how much sales on five variety of jams over a period of 5 years from 2009. Overall, it is clear that, all jams except plum shows an increase in sales over the period of time and strawberry is the largest sold item. In the beginning of the period about 3. 2 million strawberry were sold and then I increased steadily to reach the peak value of 7 million in 2014. Raspberry was the second largest item sold around 2. 8 million in 2009. The sales of raspberry teachers 5 million after 2 years and then it increased slowly. Below 2 million cherry was sold at the beginning and it fluctuated over the period and nearly 3 million jam sold in 2014. The sale of plum is almost same as raspberry in the initial year then it declined dramatically throughout the period and there are no plum sales at the end of the period. In 2009, around 0. 5 million grape was sold and it increase around 5 million to reach the value of 5. 5 million in 2014.

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 of 5 years from 2009. Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
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 of time and strawberry is the largest sold item. In the beginning of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
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 and then I increased steadily
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 in 2014. Raspberry was the second largest item sold around 2. 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2009. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
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 of raspberry teachers 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 after 2 years and then it increased slowly
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 cherry was sold
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 and nearly
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 jam sold in 2014. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
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 of plum is almost same as raspberry in the initial year then it declined dramatically
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. In 2009, around 0. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2014. 