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The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. EaBB
The four pie charts illustrate the reasons for the usage of mobile phones by teenagers in an African country from 2016 to 2019. Overall, In all these years the most significant source of usage was social networks which accounted for nearly half of the utilization, while phone calls stood at the least. Whereas, there is a drop in the scenario of email as the percentage fell. In the contrast, digital camera usage slowly rose. Young people's utilization of social media had started at 50% in the first year and reached 56% in 2019 with mere odds as well as evens while their priority to phone calls gradually decreased to 5 % from 10 % by 2019. Meanwhile, The digital camera usage was the only constant spike till 2019 reaching 20 % on this as opposed to the case of email which was dropped every passing year reaching 19% at the end.
The four pie charts illustrate the reasons for the
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usage
of mobile phones by
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teenagers
in an African country from 2016 to 2019.

Overall
, In all these years the most significant source of
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usage
was social networks which accounted for
nearly
half of the utilization, while phone calls stood at the least. Whereas, there is a drop in the scenario of email as the percentage fell. In the contrast, digital camera
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usage
slowly
rose.

Young
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people
's utilization of social media had
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started
at 50% in the
first
year and reached 56% in 2019 with mere odds
as well
as evens while their priority to phone calls
gradually
decreased to 5 % from 10 % by 2019.

Meanwhile, The digital camera
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usage
was the
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constant spike till 2019 reaching 20 % on this as opposed to the case of email which
was dropped
every passing year reaching 19% at the
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end
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

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151 words
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