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The chart shows the population growth in 4 different points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050.

The chart shows the population growth in 4 different points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050. 6Lly0
The chart indicates the population growth rate in 4 significant points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050. It is shown that the lines symbolizing the ages did and will have both positive and negative trending. On the top of the chart is over 65-year-old line. In 1950, its rate was 60% and 40 years later, it went up to 70%. However, it reversed and started decreasing for the following 30 years. In addition, over 65 age is forecast to continue slowing down in growth until 2050. Whereas people from 0 to 14 turns up the opposite side as the rate remained its stability for 40 consecutive years (5%). Since then, its speed has been increasing in an upwards curve and the rate will likely grow faster from 2022 and stop at 20% in 2050. 25 to 37-year-old line is marked by its unusual trend. It reached the uppermost at 20% in 1950. For 40 years, it kept being cut down to only 10%. Conversely, 38 to 45 line jumped up by 25% at the same time. 1990 to 2000 was the period when people 25 to 37 growth rate hovered around 10% while 38 to 45-year-old growth rate couldn’t keep up with stabilizing and turned down. After that, 25 to 37-year-olds did and will carry on slowing down in increasing to almost 0 in 2050. On the other hand, the remaining line did and will meet the same situation as 25 to 37 from 1990 to 2000 until 2050. In conclusion, after 100 years, even though over 65-year-old growth rate will decrease by 5%, it will still be the highest rate of all the lines.
The chart indicates the population
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in 4 significant points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050.

It
is shown
that the
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lines
symbolizing the ages did and will have both
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positive
and
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negative
trending. On the top of the chart is over 65-year-
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old
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line
. In 1950, its
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rate
was 60% and 40 years later, it went up to 70%.
However
, it reversed and
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started
decreasing for the following 30 years.
In addition
, over 65 age is forecast to continue slowing
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down
in
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growth
until 2050. Whereas
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people
from 0 to 14 turns up the opposite side as the
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rate
remained its stability for 40 consecutive years (5%). Since then, its speed has been increasing in an upwards curve and the
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rate
will likely grow faster from 2022 and
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stop
at 20% in 2050.

25 to 37-year-
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old
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line
is marked
by its unusual trend. It reached the uppermost at 20% in 1950. For 40 years, it
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kept
being
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cut
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down
to
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only
10%.
Conversely
, 38 to 45
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jumped up by 25% at the same time. 1990 to 2000 was the period when
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people
25 to 37
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growth
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hovered around 10% while 38 to 45-year-
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old
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growth
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couldn’t
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keep
up with stabilizing and turned
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down
. After that, 25 to 37-year-olds did and will carry on slowing
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down
in increasing to almost 0 in 2050.
On the other hand
, the remaining
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line
did and will
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meet
the same situation as 25 to 37 from 1990 to 2000 until 2050.

In conclusion
, after 100 years,
even though
over 65-year-
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old
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growth
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rate
will decrease by 5%, it will
still
be the highest
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rate
of all the
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lines
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the population growth in 4 different points: 1950, 1990, 2000 and 2050.

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