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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Gross Domestic product generated from IT sector and service industry in the UK between 1992 and 2000.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Gross Domestic product generated from IT sector and service industry in the UK between 1992 and 2000. qRkx5
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Gross Domestic product generated from IT sector and service industry in the UK between 1992 and 2000. Overall, it can be seen that despite some fluctuation, the level of GDP from IT industry reached its highest at the end of the given timeframe, while service sector grew up gradually throughout the whole period. Compared to the beginning of the year, the proportion of both of them increased at the end. According to the graph, in 1992, IT industry accounted for approximately 6. 1%, whereas service sector started off 4% GDP. Moreover, after the next two years, level of both components was higher than it started, reaching around 8% and nearly 7%, respectively. However, the level became more similar, though, IT sector declined a little bit and service industry increased by 0. 2 or 0. 3% in 1996. On the other hand, the trends of the components increased noticeably. The percentage of GDP from IT jumped sharply to 12% in the year 1998 and attained its maximum growth in the final year (nearly 15%). Meanwhile, service sector remained the same, growing to only 8%, which made up slightly more than in the previous years.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Gross Domestic product generated from IT
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sector
and
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service
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industry
in the UK between 1992 and 2000.

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seen
that despite
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some
fluctuation, the level of GDP from IT
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industry
reached its highest at the
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end
of the
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given
timeframe, while
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service
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sector
grew up
gradually
throughout the whole period. Compared to the beginning of the
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year
, the proportion of both of them increased at the
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end
.

According to the graph, in 1992, IT
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industry
accounted for approximately 6. 1%, whereas
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service
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sector
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started
off 4% GDP.
Moreover
, after the
next
two years, level of both components was higher than it
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started
, reaching around 8% and
nearly
7%,
respectively
.
However
, the level became more similar, though, IT
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sector
declined a
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little bit
and
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service
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industry
increased by 0. 2 or 0. 3% in 1996.

On the other hand
, the trends of the components increased
noticeably
. The percentage of GDP from IT jumped
sharply
to 12% in the
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year
1998 and attained its maximum growth in the final
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(
nearly
15%). Meanwhile,
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service
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sector
remained the same, growing to
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only
8%, which made up
slightly
more than in the previous years.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Gross Domestic product generated from IT sector and service industry in the UK between 1992 and 2000.

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