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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. 2blbM
The chart illustrates the proportion of women and men whom succeeded in their driving test in one specific Asian country from 1980 to 2010 Overall, it come as a surprise that Woman outnumbered Men in driving test in every single year. The biggest difference came from the year 1980 and 2000 when Women dominated Men, the percentage of women archived their driving license is around 20% more compared to Men. The numbers of people passed their driving test witnessed an upward trending in the first 20 years, in both genders. From 1980 to 1990, the proportion of Women only increased from around 48% to 51% but sky-rocketed to approximately 70% in the next 10 years. This also the last year that we seen an upward trending for Women as it fell to 65% in 2010 On the other hand, Men has archived a significantly rose in their percentage from nearly 30% in 1980 to around 50% in 2000. Unlike Women, after the year 2000, the numbers of Men passed their test maintained and shown no sign of downward trend.
The chart illustrates the proportion of
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in one specific Asian country from 1980 to 2010

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as a surprise that Woman outnumbered
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Men
in
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driving
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in every single
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. The biggest difference came from the
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1980 and 2000 when
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Women
dominated
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Men
, the percentage of
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women
archived their
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driving
license is around 20% more compared to
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.

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The
numbers of
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people
passed their
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driving
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witnessed an upward trending in the
first
20 years, in both genders. From 1980 to 1990, the proportion of
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Women
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increased from around 48% to 51%
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sky-rocketed to approximately 70% in the
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year
that we
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an upward trending for
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as it fell to 65% in 2010

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,
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Men
has archived a
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Women
, after the
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2000, the numbers of
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passed their
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maintained and shown no
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of downward trend.

IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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