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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. QL2wK
This line graph shows different between cell phone and residental phone services in US. It is clear from the graph that annual expenditures of cell phone is higher that residentail phone services. According to what is shown, on 2001 there is a huge difference between cell phone and residential where the avarge was $200 and $700 respectively. Moreover, since 2002 the avarge of cell phone is speedily increased. In addition, in 2006 both avarge of cell phone and residential services are both almost $600. However, the cell phone service rocketed to its peak in 2010 to be reached $80. In other hand, the average of residential phone service was on its peak durin 2001 where it was around $700. However, it dramatically decreased to reached $400 in 2010. Moreover, on 2007 the avrage of residential phone services sharply declined. To sum up, we could say that average of annual expenditure for both cell phhone and residential phone services are change during the period between 2001 and 2010.
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in US. It is
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from the graph that annual expenditures of
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is higher that
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services.

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, on 2001 there is a huge difference between
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cell
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and
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where the
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avarge
was $200 and $700
respectively
.
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, since 2002 the
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is
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increased.
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, in 2006 both
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and
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are both almost $600.
However
, the
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cell
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rocketed to its peak in 2010 to
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$80.

In other hand, the average of
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was on its peak
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2001 where it was around $700.
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sharply
declined.

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during the period between 2001 and 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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