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The chart shows the percent of world passenger car production by area.

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The bar charts compare the proportion of passenger cars being mainly manufactured in the seven different regions over the world. Overall, it can be seen clearly that there was a great rate of producing this transport in the areas of Greater China as the most salient feature. Greater China and Europe regions led the world in terms of this manufacturing field, with 27% and 25% respectively. Rather surprisingly, this rate in Europe was higher than in South Asia by nearly three times, where the rate of produced passenger cars just accounted for 8% of total. Following behind these two leads, the percentage of manufactures lower is that in North America area came in at nearly 18% passenger cars, with in Japan/Korea at only 16%. Notably, The Middle East/Africa region had the least rate of this field at just 2%, which is witnessed half of what was manufactured in South America. In conclusion, the manufactures of the passenger cars were seen the variety in the different parts of the world, with the dominant coming in Greater China, Europe, North American and Japan/Korea. However, all other areas saw a least common.
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Following behind these two leads, the percentage of manufactures lower is that in North America area came in at
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