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The table below shows how the percentage of British adults who use the internet changed over a five year period.

The table below shows how the percentage of British adults who use the internet changed over a five year period. 9Qqbp
The table provides information about the percentage of adults in Great Britain who used the internet between 2000 and 2005. The data considered people who used the internet in August, September and October. We can see from the table that the percentage of adults who used the internet, in the four different age groups, grew over the 5 years. The higher percentage can be found in the 16-24 age group and the lowest percentage in the 55-64 age group. In October 2000, only 24% of adults in the 55-64 age group used the internet. Meanwhile, in the same year, 70% of adults in the 16-24 age group used the internet. The 16-24 age group achieved the highest percentage in 2004, with 90% of them using the internet. The highest percentage in the 55-64 age group was in October 2005, with 51%. Comparing the 25-44 and 45-54 age groups, there was a gradual growth in the percentage of people from these groups, which maintained a balanced growth over the years, around 30%. Although the general percentage of British adults using the internet increased between 2000 and 2005, young adult groups were the ones who had more expressive usage of the internet.
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was in October 2005, with 51%. Comparing the 25-44 and 45-54
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using the internet increased between 2000 and 2005, young adult
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had more expressive usage of the internet.
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IELTS academic The table below shows how the percentage of British adults who use the internet changed over a five year period.

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